great color work, there seems to be some kind of white cast over it for some reason, it may be just my screen, but you might have to play w/ the contrast a bit.
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Yeah, you're colors have improved a lot. As mentioned earlier the colors seem a bit washed out/faded since there's very little contrast. However, since there's likely to be a lot of dust floating around its rather appropriate that the contrast is as low as it is. It gives this piece a nice atmosphere, though.
Wow, what a beautiful fanart. The muted earth tones, decapitated battlecat, and 'smoky' background make an unusual contrast to Rodimus' clearly upbeat attitude.
Very very nicely done. There is more detail in the flag. Rodimus himself looks a lot more 3D and shiny. And as Rodimus' #1fan I would give it a 9/10. Colours could be a tiny bit more vivid. And flag a bit more realistic. But over all its awesome! One good thing I noticed right away is that Roddy's hand is much more realistic because of the silvered joints. I think the reflection in the "feet" is a major part which makes the picture stand out. The gloss was very well done. The orange and red are the right colours of Rodimus, but the yellow isnt "gold" enough. The loss of the "hands" on the inner foot is good, but the lines that are supposed to be war "cracks" (i think thats what they are) are too much. Maybe just 2 or 3 would be better. the tires look sort of too light. A richer black would be good, and a nice tread pattern. I just noticed the eye colour isnt blue. more turquoise. I think blue would be better. The detailing in the foreground is quite amazing. The ravage head is an improvement from the original. Rodimus looks almost perfectly proportionate, except for HIS right arm, our left. To me it looks to small. the Autobot symbol is nice too. But the one on the flag with flames is too "fake" looking. The original flag was better. One last thing. the knee cap is too big. I know You didnt draw it, im just critiquing on the picture here.
All these things are in one Rodimus fan's humble opinion. Its very good Hans!
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too bad i cant really crit it at the moment.
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Even though lighter than Josh's rendition, it still works and I like it still as it gives a nice range of moods and atmospheres for this piece.
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All these things are in one Rodimus fan's humble opinion. Its very good Hans!
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